Student presentation of the paper entitled "Blue and fin whale call source levels and propagation range in the Southern Ocean" by Ana Širović et al., on Journal of the Acoustic Society of America (2007).
Duration of the talk: 9 min 53 sec
09:53 Q&A
09:55 Nathan C's question
10:44 Vivian's question
11:12 Rebecca's question
11:56 Ivan's question
12:43 Jerry's question
13:38 Nina's question (volunteer)
13:54 Jason's question (volunteer)
14:58 Sophia's question (volunteer)
15:53 Yushih's comments
Strength:
- She added the audios of whale calls (01:48)
Weakness:
- The purpose statements (00:34) were not real purposes (more like introduction)
- Avoid reading script without the keywords printed (04:39 - 05:05)
- Fig 1b of the paper should be presented in the formal slide to introduce the method (present around 04:39)
- Figures were not well introduced (06:16, 07:19); explain axes and symbols. Introduce the figure before presenting the concluding remarks
- Discussion was wordy and uninteresting (08:12). Reduce word counts and add images. The statements in discussion are best displayed next to the associated data
- Add a conclusion slide to wrap up the talk
- Use larger font
